Thursday, December 29, 2011

"Freedom" to try to write literature

How do you review a two-year-old novel that took you a year to read and that no one else in the country at this time cares much about?

Last Christmas, my nephew Sean overbought my present having drawn me in the family lottery and knowing I was fast running out of money to support myself. He sent me the book I asked for, "Freedom" by Jonathan Franzen, (2010, Farrar, Straus and Giroux), an Oprah's Book Club selection, and called the best book of American fiction for that year by Esquire magazine.

Sean also sent me a new pair of jeans and a very nice sweater-like shirt/jacket, my appreciation for which has lasted much longer than my appreciation for Franzen's book.

And yet, finally having finished the novel, I wanted to review it here in my own time, hoping to acknowledge not only my sister's son's generosity but also the longterm pleasure one gets from reading even when the quality of the writing is less than you might have hoped.

Literature, after all, is created by writing that is memorably excellent, and Franzen's book is meant to be a literary novel, not just a best seller. 

I don't think the book was as bad as it was considered to be by B.R. Myers, who practically ridiculed it in a review in the October 2010 issue of The Atlantic magazine. But I also don't think Franzen's work was worthy of the three A+s, seven As, two A-s, and three Bs which the book earned by graders at the complete review, a website that aggregates reviews of recently published books and offers a grade for the book based on the content of the review. The Atlantic's review gained "Freedom" its lowest grade: D.

But as I read the book, I never got a sense of reading something "good-to-great" until the final chapter of Franzen's 562 pages. A good book will give you that sensation much earlier in the writing, and a classic work of literature gives it to you from the start.

And still I kept reading, from last New Year's Day until I finished about mid October. I do that not only because I admit to being a slow reader but also because I could sense Franzen's striving. There was some heft to his story, and he was making a novel out of what one reviewer called "everyday life" in America, content I have always believed contains the heroism of every great American literary classic.

Even when the writer's efforts fall short of that standard, the experience of reading the words can bring great pleasure. That is the essence of the best seller in America. It doesn't have to be a literary giant to sell. It just has to extend the pleasure of reading to those who keep turning its pages.

There are other weaknesses in Franzen's book.

For a novel about the preservation of a bird species and the natural environment, the writing is particularly devoid of natural imagery. Perhaps that's an intentional device to support the theme of the overcommercialization of American life, but images are the stuff of great literature, and to subtract them from your writing rather than revel in them seems a mistake.

Instead, Franzen tries to describe mental states: thoughts, reflections, philosophies and ideologies. But such description falls short of the imaginative scenery a reader constructs when ingesting a great piece of fiction, a real world made up only in one's imagination.

I missed that element of a great book as I read "Freedom" over a long period of time. Still, I enjoyed ten months of mild reading pleasure. 

Saturday, December 17, 2011

Rita Dove's anthology, reported sans criticism

Much has been made in the literary press lately about Helen Vendler's criticism of Rita Dove's editing of the "Penguin Anthology of 20th Century American Poetry," and Dove's response to the inestimable Yeats scholar and critic.

The PBS Newshour's Jeff Brown on Friday broadcast an interview of Dove about the book, without even mentioning Vendler's criticism. The exclusion of controversy from Brown's initial coverage of Dove's anthology was refreshing.

Click here to watch and listen.

Saturday, September 17, 2011

What is this? A work (art work?) in process

I've started this blog prematurely by changing the name of another working blog I had in my blogger account in hopes of building this space into a place for a statewide conversation about the arts as well as a marketplace for my own and others' work.

My goal is to have Colorado artists participate here by blogging about art offerings across the spectrum of the state's art community: dancers, painters, writers, poets, photographers, movie makers, musicians, sculptors, actors; anyone who wants to communicate with their audience, and get feedback from that audience.

I also hope this community of artists and art consumers will share their opinions about what art is being presented in the state, through reviews and commentary that I will edit and post as our conversation develops. I will also comment occasionally.

I also want to use the space to sell my own and others' art work. I will find a way to post my own poetry here for sale, replacing my own website where I do that, and invite other artists to post work for sale. I intend to file for non-profit status for the entire enterprise, but I will charge artists a 1% of sales fee for posting their work here to generate a sale.

This has been a dream of mine for several years now, developed since I was challenged to start my own business to support myself since leaving an editor's post at a statewide business magazine, ColoradoBiz. I'm a slow learner, and that is my only explanation for why it has taken me so long to develop and start up this model.

I'm not sure how it all will work out, but I know my intentions are good, and I hope you will keep checking into the progress of this new blogger experience.